Hi Emily Nearly there! Right - outside panels. 'Ariella' on the spine - can this be the same font as on the front cover? Inside panels - it occurs to me that all images should be original - I think the big rose may be from the internet. If you HAVE to use it - manipulate it more. For a start - cut out the green background and keep it the same background colour as the photos on the opposite panel. And on the poster - first look at work layout/justification - eg 'love you so' seems to not be justified with the line previous to it. Poster also need a web address - and can you sort itunes logo so it is more visible. One final query - the poster feels a bit 'times new roman' - a common and unadventurous font. can we discuss in class tomorrow. cheers m
Hi Emily
ReplyDeleteNearly there! Right - outside panels. 'Ariella' on the spine - can this be the same font as on the front cover? Inside panels - it occurs to me that all images should be original - I think the big rose may be from the internet. If you HAVE to use it - manipulate it more. For a start - cut out the green background and keep it the same background colour as the photos on the opposite panel. And on the poster - first look at work layout/justification - eg 'love you so' seems to not be justified with the line previous to it. Poster also need a web address - and can you sort itunes logo so it is more visible. One final query - the poster feels a bit 'times new roman' - a common and unadventurous font. can we discuss in class tomorrow.
cheers m